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Writing Contest!
Write your story here! Rules: It must be about pokemon! No swearing! No sexual talk! You can only post 1 story! Rewards: 300 000IC And a pokemon of you choice (just not rares like darkrai .-.)! You can choose the pokemons level and moves!
Re: Writing Contest!
Oncez uponz a timez therez wasz a personz namez was shinasukaz and he kept using z's for everything, and pikachuz shockedz himz with thunderboltz.
THE ENDZ.
THE ENDZ.
AsukaDyna- Posts : 123
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 30
Re: Writing Contest!
ROFL XDDDDAsukaDaigo wrote:Oncez uponz a timez therez wasz a personz namez was shinasukaz and he kept using z's for everything, and pikachuz shockedz himz with thunderboltz.
THE ENDZ.
Re: Writing Contest!
I'm not good on storytelling,
But I'll try
It's a 'Ugly Ducking Story' in Remix Version
Here's the cast
Mother Lugia as Mother Duck
Baby Lugia as Baby Duck
Baby Ho-Oh as Ugly Baby Duck
It is a beautiful summer day. The sun shines warmly on an old house near a river. Behind the house a Mother Lugia is sitting on ten eggs. "Tchick." One by one all the eggs break open...
All except one. This one is the biggest egg of all.
Mother Lugia sits and sits on the big egg. At last it breaks open, "Tchick, tchick!"
Out jumps the last baby. It looks big and strong. It is grey and ugly.
The next day Mother Lugia takes all her little baby Lugias to the river. She jumps into it. All her babies jump in. The big ugly one jumps in too.
They all swim and play together. The ugly lugias swims better than all the other .
- Quack, quack! Come with me to the farm yard! - says mother lugia to her babies and they all follow her there.
The farm yard is very noisy. The poor ugly baby is so unhappy there. The Starly peck him, the Pidgeot flies at him, the Golduck bite him, the farmer kicks him.
. . . . . . . . . . .
At last one day he runs away. He comes to a river. He sees many beautiful big birds swimming there. Their feathers are like rainbows, their necks so long, their wings so pretty. The little Ugly Lugia looks and looks at them. He wants to be with them. He wants to stay and watch them. He knows they are Ho-Oh.
Oh, how he wants to be beautiful like them.
. . . . . . . . . . . .
Now it is winter. Everything is white with snow. The river is covered with ice. The ugly baby is very cold and unhappy.
Spring comes once again. The sun shines warmly. Everything is fresh and green.
One morning the ugly Lugias sees the beautiful Ho-Oh again. He knows them. He wants so much to swim with them in the river. But he is afraid of them.
Everyone bullies him, He wants to die.
In a peak of his frustation. he runs into the river. He looks into the water. There in the water he sees a beautiful Ho-Oh.
It is he! He is no more an ugly Lugia.
He is a beautiful rainbow Ho-Oh now!.
He comes to another Ho-Oh in the river, and go with them to the another parts of the Indigo World
-THE END-
It's just for fun,
But I'll try
It's a 'Ugly Ducking Story' in Remix Version
Here's the cast
Mother Lugia as Mother Duck
Baby Lugia as Baby Duck
Baby Ho-Oh as Ugly Baby Duck
It is a beautiful summer day. The sun shines warmly on an old house near a river. Behind the house a Mother Lugia is sitting on ten eggs. "Tchick." One by one all the eggs break open...
All except one. This one is the biggest egg of all.
Mother Lugia sits and sits on the big egg. At last it breaks open, "Tchick, tchick!"
Out jumps the last baby. It looks big and strong. It is grey and ugly.
The next day Mother Lugia takes all her little baby Lugias to the river. She jumps into it. All her babies jump in. The big ugly one jumps in too.
They all swim and play together. The ugly lugias swims better than all the other .
- Quack, quack! Come with me to the farm yard! - says mother lugia to her babies and they all follow her there.
The farm yard is very noisy. The poor ugly baby is so unhappy there. The Starly peck him, the Pidgeot flies at him, the Golduck bite him, the farmer kicks him.
. . . . . . . . . . .
At last one day he runs away. He comes to a river. He sees many beautiful big birds swimming there. Their feathers are like rainbows, their necks so long, their wings so pretty. The little Ugly Lugia looks and looks at them. He wants to be with them. He wants to stay and watch them. He knows they are Ho-Oh.
Oh, how he wants to be beautiful like them.
. . . . . . . . . . . .
Now it is winter. Everything is white with snow. The river is covered with ice. The ugly baby is very cold and unhappy.
Spring comes once again. The sun shines warmly. Everything is fresh and green.
One morning the ugly Lugias sees the beautiful Ho-Oh again. He knows them. He wants so much to swim with them in the river. But he is afraid of them.
Everyone bullies him, He wants to die.
In a peak of his frustation. he runs into the river. He looks into the water. There in the water he sees a beautiful Ho-Oh.
It is he! He is no more an ugly Lugia.
He is a beautiful rainbow Ho-Oh now!.
He comes to another Ho-Oh in the river, and go with them to the another parts of the Indigo World
-THE END-
It's just for fun,
zy_zhou- Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 33
Location : Bandung, Indonesia
Re: Writing Contest!
well i cant say its creative, cuz you copied it from the story "The Ugly Duckling" Well in any case ill wait for more ppl to join this contestzy_zhou wrote:I'm not good on storytelling,
But I'll try
It's a 'Ugly Ducking Story' in Remix Version
Here's the cast
Mother Lugia as Mother Duck
Baby Lugia as Baby Duck
Baby Ho-Oh as Ugly Baby Duck
It is a beautiful summer day. The sun shines warmly on an old house near a river. Behind the house a Mother Lugia is sitting on ten eggs. "Tchick." One by one all the eggs break open...
All except one. This one is the biggest egg of all.
Mother Lugia sits and sits on the big egg. At last it breaks open, "Tchick, tchick!"
Out jumps the last baby. It looks big and strong. It is grey and ugly.
The next day Mother Lugia takes all her little baby Lugias to the river. She jumps into it. All her babies jump in. The big ugly one jumps in too.
They all swim and play together. The ugly lugias swims better than all the other .
- Quack, quack! Come with me to the farm yard! - says mother lugia to her babies and they all follow her there.
The farm yard is very noisy. The poor ugly baby is so unhappy there. The Starly peck him, the Pidgeot flies at him, the Golduck bite him, the farmer kicks him.
. . . . . . . . . . .
At last one day he runs away. He comes to a river. He sees many beautiful big birds swimming there. Their feathers are like rainbows, their necks so long, their wings so pretty. The little Ugly Lugia looks and looks at them. He wants to be with them. He wants to stay and watch them. He knows they are Ho-Oh.
Oh, how he wants to be beautiful like them.
. . . . . . . . . . . .
Now it is winter. Everything is white with snow. The river is covered with ice. The ugly baby is very cold and unhappy.
Spring comes once again. The sun shines warmly. Everything is fresh and green.
One morning the ugly Lugias sees the beautiful Ho-Oh again. He knows them. He wants so much to swim with them in the river. But he is afraid of them.
Everyone bullies him, He wants to die.
In a peak of his frustation. he runs into the river. He looks into the water. There in the water he sees a beautiful Ho-Oh.
It is he! He is no more an ugly Lugia.
He is a beautiful rainbow Ho-Oh now!.
He comes to another Ho-Oh in the river, and go with them to the another parts of the Indigo World
-THE END-
It's just for fun,
Re: Writing Contest!
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well i cant say its creative, cuz you copied it from the story "The Ugly Duckling" Well in any case ill wait for more ppl to join this contest[/quote]
Yeah, I simply copied it,
how long does usually a contest held?
well i cant say its creative, cuz you copied it from the story "The Ugly Duckling" Well in any case ill wait for more ppl to join this contest[/quote]
Yeah, I simply copied it,
how long does usually a contest held?
zy_zhou- Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 33
Location : Bandung, Indonesia
Re: Writing Contest!
well i cant say its creative, cuz you copied it from the story "The Ugly Duckling" Well in any case ill wait for more ppl to join this contest[/quote]zy_zhou wrote:
Yeah, I simply copied it,
how long does usually a contest held? [/quote]AHH EGAD! you copied it COPYRIGHT! YOU SHALL BE SUED.
JKJKJKJk
AsukaDyna- Posts : 123
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 30
Re: Writing Contest!
qAsukaDaigo wrote:well i cant say its creative, cuz you copied it from the story "The Ugly Duckling" Well in any case ill wait for more ppl to join this contestzy_zhou wrote:
Yeah, I simply copied it,
how long does usually a contest held? [/quote]AHH EGAD! you copied it COPYRIGHT! YOU SHALL BE SUED.
JKJKJKJk[/quote]
It' written on the tittle
'It's a 'Ugly Ducking Story' in Remix Version'
zy_zhou- Posts : 22
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 33
Location : Bandung, Indonesia
Re: Writing Contest!
Asuka stop writing random comments...THANKS >.> And Imma wait for more ppl to join this contest
Re: Writing Contest!
Can it be like a fan fic or something? O.o
Shikore- Posts : 10
Join date : 2011-01-16
Age : 29
Location : Nooorth Carolina! O.o
Re: Writing Contest!
Umm whaddya mean? Yo hafta write a story here ;o or poem XDDShikore wrote:Can it be like a fan fic or something? O.o
Re: Writing Contest!
awww man
i feel like that time i had to write a story in english
the only difference is im not being graded
OR AM I ???
i feel like that time i had to write a story in english
the only difference is im not being graded
OR AM I ???
Jerry- Posts : 73
Join date : 2011-01-16
Age : 27
Location : california
Re: Writing Contest!
Jerryc wrote:awww man
i feel like that time i had to write a story in english
the only difference is im not being graded
OR AM I ???
uhm.. what do you mean?
it's not hard to write a story in English.
just use the Google Translator and in case, I ca help you with translation too
Re: Writing Contest
LOL!!
im not talking about english language
im talking about english class
you know school
im not talking about english language
im talking about english class
you know school
Jerry- Posts : 73
Join date : 2011-01-16
Age : 27
Location : california
Re: Writing Contest!
i hate english.......
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A small umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where people were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind him chased a seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
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A small umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where people were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind him chased a seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
WarriorJCM- Posts : 51
Join date : 2011-01-20
Location : USA
Re: Writing Contest!
EeveeX5 wrote:zy_zhou wrote:I'm not good on storytelling,
But I'll try
It's a 'Ugly Ducking Story' in Remix Version
Here's the cast
Mother Lugia as Mother Duck
Baby Lugia as Baby Duck
Baby Ho-Oh as Ugly Baby Duck
.
Out jumps the last baby. It looks big and strong. It is grey and ugly.
If the ugly duckling is Ho-Oh wouldn't it be raindow not gray?
just saying...
WarriorJCM- Posts : 51
Join date : 2011-01-20
Location : USA
Re: Writing Contest!
Hmm nice but i didint understand the end o-o the Umbreon stole the fish again and then? O-o Its missing the end :/WarriorJCM wrote:i hate english.......
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A small umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where people were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind him chased a seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
Re: Writing Contest!
Its a repeat, im not sure of the accual term but the moral of the story is that the umbreon didn't learn the lesson
WarriorJCM- Posts : 51
Join date : 2011-01-20
Location : USA
Re: Writing Contest!
WarriorJCM wrote:Its a repeat, im not sure of the accual term but the moral of the story is that the umbreon didn't learn the lesson
Yea, but its still missing the end o-o Wells anyways GJ
Re: Writing Contest!
NICE STORY and can i re enter mines evee? mines is failWarriorJCM wrote:i hate english.......
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A small umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where people were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind him chased a seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
Summary of my story:
A person named Asuka was being annoying by putting z's on everything and pikachu shocked him. THE ENDZ
AsukaDyna- Posts : 123
Join date : 2011-01-15
Age : 30
Re: Writing Contest!
EeveeX5 wrote:WarriorJCM wrote:Its a repeat, im not sure of the accual term but the moral of the story is that the umbreon didn't learn the lesson
Yea, but its still missing the end o-o Wells anyways GJ
NO! BECUASE IF I (FINISHED IT) IT'LL LOOK LIKE THIS
A small umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where people were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind him chased a seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
As soon as he passed an intersection of narrow passages, a hand shot out and grabbed the cuff of the umbreon's tail. The umbreon yelped in surprise as it was lifted off the ground with ease. The umbreon turned its head around to see a Nidoqueen standing there. Nidoqueen is a large, blue Pokémon with both mammalian and reptilian features. She has a thick tail and mouse-like ears. Her lower-jaw, chest-plates and lower torso are cream-colored. She was frowning at the umbreon, who seemed frightened by her appearance, as well as the spikes running down the length of her back and the horn on her forehead.
"Little umbreon, what do you think you're doing with that fish?" The Nidoqueen asked, "You do know I was waiting to buy that, correct?"
The umbreon grimaced, looking away in fear. "Uh..." He could only stutter, frozen stiff due to her overwhelming grasp on its tail. The Nidoqueen sighed, beginning to walk back the way the umbreon came. "I don't mind chasing rattatas, but hunting little thieves is not my hobby, you got that, little umbreon?"
"Yes ma'am." The umbreon said, looking down at the ground stiffly, realizing the Nidoqueen was carrying it with only one hand, and she could probably break it in half if she really wanted to. Knowing its position, fear was only natural.
"If I ever see you stealing again, I promise it won't end well for you." The Nidoqueen warned. The umbreon swallowed the lump in its throat, not wanting to know what the woman would do to it if she catches it again. It would have to stop risking it and stop stealing.
"O-okay..." The umbreon was still deathly afraid of the Nidoqueen as she had not let go of it just yet. The Nidoqueen turned the final corner and approached the old drowzee, who had returned to his cart, apparently he had given up. When he saw the Nidoqueen with the umbreon his brow furrowed in an angry frown.
"Sir, I brought it back for you," the Nidoqueen said, dropping the umbreon. After the umbreon righted itsself, she pushed it forward with her knee, "Go and apologize! And give that fish back while you're at it!" She snarled. The umbreon jumped forward, startled, holding out the fish to the old drowzee, its head down.
"I'm sorry old drowzee! I won't do it again! Promise!" The umbreon said hastily, stumbling over its own words.
The old drowzee glared at the umbreon, his brow still furrowed. He snatched the fish out of the umbreon's grasp and slapped it back onto the pile of fish on the cart. "100 IC for a fish, 400 IC for a bundle, and 50 IC for bait!" the old Drowzee called out.
The next day the small Umbreon ducked and weaved through the multiple carts where pokemon were selling their merchandise. The umbreon was holding a rather large fish in its mouth, a huge grin plastered across its face. Behind it chased the seemingly old drowzee, who was waving a wooden cane in the air at the umbreon. But alas, the old drowzee couldn't keep up with the small youth. The umbreon turned a corner and dashed down an ally.
.............. and on and on and on......
WarriorJCM- Posts : 51
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IM PRetty sure it gos on forever.
AsukaDyna- Posts : 123
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Re: Writing Contest!
Jerryc wrote:LOL!!
im not talking about english language
im talking about english class
you know school
oh well I remember school XD
and nice entry, Warrior but but but LOL the end? XD
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i don't understand why you don't understand... X(
WarriorJCM- Posts : 51
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yea so basically the umberon is forever a theif? Sly.WarriorJCM wrote:i don't understand why you don't understand... X(
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